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Because, I love you.. #writebravely #writetribeproblogger

I remember, those tiny little hands 

Wrapping around my neck 

In the night so dark,

Keeping me awake and numb. 

 

I remember, humming lullaby 

Holding the tiny you 

Hoping that you would sleep on cue, 

With exhaustion that never said bye. 

 

I remember, putting you down 

In the crib, with bated breath 

Standing still beside, as would a rock,

Hoping that you sleep to catch my breath. 

 

I remember, thinking that someday I would hope 

That you were here to disturb my sleep 

That this moment of exhaustion doesn’t matter, 

For I love you with all my heart.  


Linking with for Day 4 of WritetribeProBloggerChallenge prompt – Bated Breath.

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22 thoughts on “Because, I love you.. #writebravely #writetribeproblogger”

  1. mitadaur says:

    Lovely. I feel the same thing when I come home tired and exhausted after my day’s work and look at my baby’s face.. 🙂

    1. Vinitha says:

      At the end of the day, every parent feels the same love and warmth toward their child, no matter how difficult the day had been, right? Happy to have you here, Mitadaur. Thanks for the comment. 😀

      1. mitadaur says:

        Ya very true, Vinitha.. Emotions are the same, but probably expressed differently. 🙂 Keep writing.

  2. Lata Sunil says:

    A good poem… i can share with my teenaged sons.

    1. Vinitha says:

      As they grow up, we begin to get this feeling. Right now, I don’t have a moment to myself. In a few years I’m sure I would wish to go back to today. Thanks, Lata. 😀

  3. vinodinii says:

    This is such an endearing poem, full of warmth and love. Most mothers would relate to the emotions. 🙂

  4. Shalzzz says:

    Aww.. That’s really sweet, Vinitha. Pleasures of motherhood! 😊

  5. Vasantha Vivek says:

    Heart warming post, Vinitha. It brought back my sweet old memories with my son.

  6. Rashmi says:

    This is so lovely Vinitha! It took me all the way back to when I was the one singing the lullaby, waiting next to the crib… Beautifully worded.

  7. Shalzmojo says:

    How humbling to read a mother’s gratitude for having a child to hold; lovely words Vinitha

  8. Reema D'souza says:

    This was such a beautiful poem Vinitha 🙂

  9. Mahathi ramya says:

    Lovely. Every infant mother’s thoughts ☺

  10. Sanch @ Sanch Writes says:

    Beautiful post Vinitha!

  11. Parul Thakur says:

    That’s so lovely! Love has so much power, isn’t it?

  12. Obsessivemom says:

    That’s touching. A lovely expression of what every parents feels for their child. No matter how tough the day, how lousy the arguments (I have tweens, remember?) the love never fades.

  13. Sulekha says:

    Vinitha, so true. Your poem brought back sweet memories of my babies when they were little. Even with grown up kids, the feeling of love and warmth is the same. Loved your poem.

  14. Sreedeep says:

    Lovely poem, Vinitha. Motherhood shines through brilliantly. Nice, warm feeling at the end of it.

  15. Anchal says:

    You have penned it down so beautifully. Nothing is purer than a mother’s love for her child

  16. Nupur says:

    A heartwarming post! Yes a smile on your kid’s face can make you feel, lighter and brighter in an instant.

  17. Storyteller says:

    This is so true…. I do not have kids yet but I can feel same thing with my neice

  18. Alice Gerard says:

    beautiful poem, really describes love for baby.

  19. nuttynupur says:

    Yes, no one can beat the bated breath of a mother trying to put her child to sleep!

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